Suddenly, a strange noise woke me up and I started to tremble. I was really scared and i didn’t know what to do. Finally, I decided to lay down again and cover my whole head with my pillow and wait to see if I could hear the noise again. After several minutes I was sleeping again... Blue, green, yellow, purple, red, black, pink, white!!! Colors! A whole world full of colors appeared in my mind! It was a fantastic world! Colors, happy music, smiles everywhere. it was the perfect place... I began to walk all around this world, I wanted to discover more about all that! First I saw a beautiful river going down slowly through a magic forest... Then I saw a whole field full of different and colorful mushrooms and I ran until the river didn’t let me continue. I asked if there was a way to cross the river and no one understood me so I decided to walk along the river until I a way to cross it. Finally I saw something that was shining a lot and I went there. It was the best rainbow I had ever seen. It was a rainbow that you could use to cross the river like a bridge. It was the best bridge I had ever crossed...
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very colorful composition marina!!
Your bridge over the river reminded me of the rainbow...sometimes double, that we can see out the studio window over the hills on the other side of the riverbed. keep up the good work, you'll need to write well if you go to high school next year in the states. the more you write, the better. I promise to correct everything you do.
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